Of course paraphrasing works. Couldn’t agree more with that. I should have to read Hustvedt’s book again but, if she really goes against it, then this would be a reasoning failure in her book. I like the idea of the word salad. You throw up words in the air and then they rain down on you with a different tune. I love the beauty and sensuality of Embroidery. In fact, I prefer it to Amichai’s. In yours there is more emotional vibrancy, a melancholic touch and all the images are very beautiful. Your definition of words like graphic design, like a canvas to fill in with colors is a good metaphor that shows you are a whole artist-writer. Well done, my friend.
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Of course paraphrasing works. Couldn’t agree more with that. I should have to read Hustvedt’s book again but, if she really goes against it, then this would be a reasoning failure in her book. I like the idea of the word salad. You throw up words in the air and then they rain down on you with a different tune. I love the beauty and sensuality of Embroidery. In fact, I prefer it to Amichai’s. In yours there is more emotional vibrancy, a melancholic touch and all the images are very beautiful. Your definition of words like graphic design, like a canvas to fill in with colors is a good metaphor that shows you are a whole artist-writer. Well done, my friend.